这篇英语作文有什么错误?
题目:你父母是你朋友么?你父母让你取得好成绩吗?你父母让你交朋友么?请以If I were a father/mother为题,写一篇作文
作文:
If I were a father
We all must befathers or mothers in the future.If I were a father how should I treat my kids?Here is my idea
If I were afather I would teach my kid a lot if truth. For example, Iwould teach my kid to be happy all the time,to reagrd difficulty as challenge,to beat all the problems……If I were a father I would make friends with my kid , I would play games with it,I would keep it healthy,and growing fast.If I were a father ,I wouldn't make it get so good grades,but it is not allowed to copy others.Also I would help it to make a lots of friends.
I believe if I were a father ,I would bevery good
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解答
我就在原文上改动了哦~f I were a fatherWe all must be fathers or mothers in the future.(这句我会说成:we all will become parents in the future)If I were a father,how should I treat my kids?Here is my...
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