求高手点评以下的英语作文.
Mr.Schoolmaster My name is Peter,Junior 2 student in our school.Nowadays,I made a report of the dream about our future work.Now,I want to show thie report to you.
In this report,there are 50 boys and the same number of girls join us.While 35% of grils wish to be a teacher and only 5 p-ercent of boys have the same dream.Also,there are 20% of girls and the same number of boys wish to be a doctor.But in becoming a businessman or businesswoman,there are only 5% of girls wish to be and 5 times in boys.Of course there ar-e a little people don't know what they will be.Only 5% in boys and the same number in girls.
So,I want to have your opinion and your suggestion.Thank you.