你试下这个翻译吧.希望有帮助.
The new oil cylinders we ordered and the anker-holth oil cylinders which used in the field are totally interchange in installation dimension,so you need change the oil cylinder installation flange and foundation connection dimension,change the oil cylinder piston rod and casting platform connection dimension,and change the adjunctive pipes connection dimension.谢谢您的热心帮助!这段话用了很多语法,担心过于复杂,外国人读起来容易迷惑,请问我翻译的有问题吗?可以指出来,谢谢!看你的中文材料是比较实用的,所以翻的时候最好尽量避免复杂,把关键词和关键点简洁明了地译出来即可。我揭开了一层又一层的包装后发现里面还有无数层,这是我读你的译文时的感觉。哦,我试试将您翻译的这段话发给外国人,你觉得没有问题的话,我再发送,OK?哦好的。
