Hi everyone,today i will talk about my favourite cartoon .He is name is Doraemon ．He was born on September the third ,2112.But he got the modern world by magic machine .Now he is lives in a boy's home and make friend with the boy called Daxiong .The boy always meeds problems .But Doraemon will help him in time .With the help of Doraemon.The boy can come over the difficult things well .But sometimes ,Doraemon makes the things worse .Doraemon loves Dousha Cake very much and he will hide away when he sees the mouse ,so he hates the mouse very much .When he won't eat his favourite food ,then he will became so angry .
I like Doraemon very much .Because he is very lovely and he always makes me happy .帮我看看这篇介绍哆拉A梦的英语作文有没有语法上的错误,或者帮我修改得更完美．．