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Autumn 's blog
Hello everyone.Welcome to my blog.
About me
My name is autumn.I'm from Chain.I'm 36 years old.I'm not very tall and not very thin.I have a long hair.I live in a house close Shangpin Middle school.My daghter is seven years old.She studies in Shangpin Primary School.
About my hobbies
Every day,I go to work by bike or car.My favourite sport is walk.And I also good at swiming.
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Autumn 's blogHello everyone. Welcome to my blog.About 【myself】My name is 【Autumn】. I'm from 【China】. I'm 36 years old.I'm not very tall and not very thin. I have 【a去掉】long hair. I live in...About 【myself】没错，7A课文就这么写的那就把She studies in Shangpin Primary School.的in 改为at，这不算什么错。I live in a house close to Shangpin Middle 【School】.原文也是这么写的我没改School啊，我改的是介词。那你采纳楼下的吧，只是楼下的第8处错盖的不对，every day是正确的。稍等，我已经把答案发给老师了，看看他的评论。要对了我给你，不对我再问你 可是可能得晚上
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