I have a good friend.She is a pretty girl.She lives in Jiujiang.She is a middle school student.She has big eyes,a small mouth,a small nose and a round face.She is tall and thin.She likes watching TV and playing the basketball.On the weekend,she always plays basketball with her friends in the afternoon and watches TV in the evening.
She is a good student.She is good at English.She likes speaking in English.She always reports news in English in her school.
She says we are good friends.We send e-mails to each other everyday.I like her very much.
翻译如下：我有一个好朋友.她是一个漂亮的女孩,她住在九江,是一个中学生.她大眼睛、小嘴儿、小鼻子、圆脸.她身材高挑.她喜欢看电视和打篮球.周末,她常常和朋友们在下午打篮球,在晚上看电视.她是一个好学生,擅长英语.她喜欢说英语,常常在学校用英语报道新闻.
她说我们是好朋友.我们每天发电子邮件给对方.我非常喜欢她.
注：We often send e-mails to each other everyday.说法错误
应去掉often 和 everyday之一.
另外文中She出现次数太多,好几个句子都可以写为一个句子.