求:帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么问题?
The person l admire most
The person l admire most is my father.Although he is not tall and handsome enough ,he has something rare such as responsible,calm and decisive.He was born in the year of ox so he is also hardworking.Maybe this reason is a bit interesting,but it is the truth.He often tells me"If you want to succeed,you must be more hardworking than me. "