请问这个英语短文有错误吗?
The 2008 Olympic Games was held in our country.people from the world were flooded into our capital-beijing to attend this great sports meeting.
The opening and closing ceremony of the Olympic Games was grand.
51 gold medals were captured by the Chinese this time.I think chinese athletes are very brave and great,we are proud of them,they are our heroes,we won the first place in the 2008 Olympic Games.
I think we should learn the spirit of persistence from them.
考试会写这个。
希望大家帮忙好好修改修改。