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I remember it was morning,is too boring.Wash shoes.To the pot before I poured some water,I painted some shoes to washing powder.Then pick up the brush,little by little brush,brush to brush to brush the total can not afford a piece of black spots.I really want to brush clean the black spots.This time,I painted more washing powder,the result that more and more light spots,and finally,finally eliminated it.The water was cold winter,ah,really cold.After washing,I put the shoes on the sun.So I wash my dirty shoes.
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记得那是一天上午,闲着太无聊了.洗鞋子.我先往盆子里倒了一些水,我往鞋子上涂了一些洗衣粉.再拿起刷子,一点一点的刷,刷来刷去总有一块黑点刷不掉.我一定要把这个黑点刷干净.这次,我涂了更多的洗衣粉,结果那黑斑越来越淡,最后,终于把它消灭了.冬天的水好凉啊,真冷.洗完后,我把鞋子放在太阳下晒.就这样洗好我那肮脏的鞋.