麻烦英语好的朋友帮我给这篇文章改改错 Dear Li Ming,I'm excited about hearing from yo_英语解答

麻烦英语好的朋友帮我给这篇文章改改错
Dear Li Ming,
I'm excited about hearing from you.IS everything OK?
I know what worries you most recently is whether to stay abroad or come back after graduating.In my opinion,it's better for you to come back.Everyone is here,your friends,parents and most relative.Back to China,it'll be more convenient for you to look after your parents and we can also see you often.The care of the relative and the help of friends will give you much more love.These will help you make prograss on your work.
I hope my advice will help you and I'll support you forever.
Yours,
Li Hua

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首先,IS应为Is,relative应为relatives,Back to China改为If you go back to China,we can also see you often,改为 we can also meet each other frequently,比较好~prograss应为progress,最后一句我想这样说比较好 ...