首先说一下,原文似乎有点错误!
may the brisk steps slow down and finally stay in our hearts.
但愿轻快的脚步慢下来并最终在我们心中停住
Ardent love, like the green of tree , thick and dense, will vie for splendor（英式是splendour） with the days and years.
炽热的爱情像青葱的树木,茂密繁盛,意与日月争辉.
love is a circle , that doth restless move
In the same sweet eternity of love
爱情是一个轮回,不停旋转!
在这个永恒的甜蜜的爱情里.（感觉这句逻辑有点奇怪,呵呵,见谅~~）