My Favourite Day
Today is my favourite day .Because this is my birthday .
My father give me a computer games .My mother give me a birthday cake .My broter give me a birthday card .And my friends give me many birthday present .
I come in my badroom . I see a big cake on my table .On it ,there are some fruit . Next to the cake , there are ten bottel of juice . I'm very happy . I say :"Oh! Mum! Look ,my cake ,I'm happy!"

初一水平 ,这差不多够了!