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一,A special Children's Day
Afrer the wenchuan earthquake, many children were hurt,some are in hospital,and some are out of hospital.Many volunteers want to make children that hurt in earthquake happy on June,1.
On that day,the policeman and children hand in hand,and they went shopping.And university students played with childre that out of hospitaland went to school,they smiled a lot.Doctor gave atoy doll to a little girl who hurt and lay on the bed,the little girl felt very happy. There also sport stars chat with some children who hurt badly,encouraged them to be brave and hoped them go out of the hospital early.The litte patients felt warm and bright.
All the volunteers tried their best to make them happy,and gave them a special Children's Day,a Children's Day that they can't forget forever!