家乡的新面貌（A New Look of My Home Village）
I went to visit my grandparents last August.They lived in a small village far from Shenyang.I was born there ten years ago.I remembered it had been a poor place before.
But when I got to the village,I foundthat great changes had taken place there.The villagers became richer.They looked happy and healthy.A lot of new buildings were built.
My home village took on a new look.
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去年八月份我去看爷爷奶奶.他们住在离沈阳很远的一个小村庄.十年前我就出生在那里.我记得以前那是一个穷地方.
可是当我到达村子之后,我发现那里发生了巨变.乡亲们变富了,他们看起来又快乐又健康.许多新楼兴建起来.
家乡呈现了新貌