请帮我把这句话改成正确的语法
汉语：思想上一旦被束缚,你就会陷入困境,这已经成为一个等式.
初稿：The equation is that you're enfettered in thought, you're enmeshed in doom.
有人建议改成The equation is that you're enfettered in thought, being meshed in doom.
我想知道按照语法这个句子应该怎么改?