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Dear Paul,
I'm Joy,and Iwant to introduce my lifestyle for you.
Although I am very busy sometimes,I（ still） think I have much spare time to do things I like.I get up at 6 o'clock in the morning and I go to my office in the hospital,you can （image） that I am a doctor.It is a little hard for me to work 5 hours every morning.After lunch I spend two hours in the park near the hospital.However,I should work 3 hours before I go home.And I often sleep very late because I always watch TV for a long time.
This is my lifestyle,I like my job very much.Would you like to share your lifestyle with me?
Yours,
Joy
括号里的是老师给画的有问题的地方,但是不知道为什么错了,