Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about a story of mine.Someboydody say,the story is very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Let's begin
One day,it was very dark outside(此处用black不太合适).And I was on my way home.Suddenly,a spicy girl came along.And she stood beside me and said:"Are you handsome?'Whithout hesitation,I said"No".Then the girl got angry and gave me a big slap on my face.She said"No !You are lying" she cried and went away.
After the girl went away,I didn't move but thought for a moment.Mabe I am
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后面不知道你想表达什么了,你先把故事说完再说
对了,提醒你一下注意时态的运用