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Shenzhen is a coast city,there are many fine park,such as zhongshan park,lixiang park.The park everymorning have losts of old man,.shenzhen is also famous for is a tourist destination such as East OCT, Splendid China Folk Village, Window of the World, Happy Valley, Shenzhen has many dielious food,in here you can taste food from all over the world..These day ,you also can buy lots of dielious food for your friend
Shenzhen have many event,These events will help you better understand Shenzhen
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