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On my birthday, my friend gave me a small “crystal bottle”. I like it very
much and I even can’t tear myself away from it. This “crystal bottle”
twinkles. How gorgeous! There is a sparkling “crystal ball” in the crystal
bottle. The “crystal ball” has a variety of shapes and different colors.
The shining purple forms a shape of a star, the yellow a shape of a football,
the red a shape of a leather bag, and the shiny transparent a shape of a flute.
The “crystal ball” in the colorful lights, appears more dazzling bright. I like
this “crystal ball”, for it accompanied me to pass through my happy
childhood. And it will always accompany me to go on.