My friend Lily and I were born in the same day .We planted spend the birthday together This wasthe plan for us .First ,we went out for a big meal .Then we went to see the films .In the evening ,we got a lot of presents.My parents bought a big birthday cake for me and Lily's parents bought new ciothes for her .We both had a good time!
我的朋友莉莉和我是同一天出生.我们计划一起过生日,这是我们的计划.首先我们出去吃一顿大餐.然后我们去看电影.晚上,我们收到了很多礼物.我的父母买了一个大蛋糕给我,莉莉的父母给她买了新衣服.我们都过得很开心.
你再改下,有些低级