1.The ship changed its course because of there was a storm.of 去掉 because of sth,because 后面加句子
2.Hangzhou is famous as its beautiful scenery.as改为for be famous for 以什么而出名 be famous as 做为什么而出名
3.Speak slowly and try to make yourself understand.slowlier 与之前讲话速度成对比
4.My father has two brothers,both of them are all Party members.all去掉 已经有both用于两者的都
5.The composition is well written except a few spelling mistakes.except for 词组搭配
6.I believe the fundamental goodness of human nature.believe in 相信
7.The book is intended for the usual reader,not for the specialist.usual是指通常的 而general是指一般的
8.Her intension of visiting the school was see the library.was to see ..应该是的 为了看看图书馆
9.The work is so tired that I soon felt tiring.tired改为tiring 是指工作累人 而不是指人累
10.I prefer reading books rather than watching TV in the evening.rather than改为to prefer doing a to doing b
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