June 17th is my birthday,I 'm so happy .I get up at six thirty.Then,my father and mother say"happy birthday!" to me.In the morning,we visit the science museum,and in the afternoon,we have a picnic.In the evening,we sing the song and eat the birthday cake.What a happy day I have!
译文,六月十七日是我的生日,我非常地高兴.我在六点半起床.之后,我的爸爸妈妈对我说生日快乐.早上,我们参观了科学博物馆,然后在下午,我们去野炊.晚上,我们唱了生日歌然后吃了生日蛋糕.今天我是多么快乐啊!
这样行吗,