my father will tell me a story to me this night这句话有何错误?请指出并改正写错了应_英语解答

my father will tell me a story to me this night
这句话有何错误?请指出并改正
写错了
应为my father will tell a story to me this night

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解答

my father will tell me a story tonight
把 to me 去掉 ,重复了
this night 格外非正常,tonight 即可