In 1895,UN announced that it is International Volunteers Day on 12.5(12th of May or 5th of December?) every year.
So,it is necessary for us to know what is a volunteer.A volunteer is a person who does something for another who need help without reward in mind.We should be helpful to others.
Now,we need to know something about the the minset of a volunteer.First,he should have the skill and the willingness to help others.Second,he must be honest and proactive.Last but not least the spirit is willing to pay in term of monetory or time.
In my opinion,we need to encourage more people to participate in voluntory work .We can establish an organization to attract more people.We can also hold activities to tell more people about the reason why they need to help others.
I tried my best to correct your sentences but I need to change so much that I worried that I had changed all your views.Your written essay is below standard.It is so hard to correct without distorting the whole essay!我把作文要求写在了上边,能不能帮我详细改一下,谢谢,错的用括号标出。已改啦。