帮助英文文章改错
英语牛人帮忙,虽然本人是英语牛人团团员,但这份题目非常重要,因此想做到100％,而且,这是新加坡中学题目,估计至少相当于四级,请诸位帮帮小弟.
这是一篇采访稿,内有20个错误（全部语法,不要费劲找单词拼写错误或标点符号错误,只能修改,不能添加或删除）,为了方便,每段话我都加了号码,不过这是一整篇文章,你们说几号的哪里错了,应该改为什么,找不够20个没关系,能找几个找几个,集思广益没问题,
1.Interviewer:How long did the journey takes?
2.Miss Li:About fifteen minutes.There was a good bus service where I live.
3.Interviewer:What attracted you to the present job?
4.
Miss Li:I am feeling that a job in the sales department would provide
me with the experience I am needing.I also am thinking that your firm
is well establish and the prospects are good.
5.Interviewer:Could I know something about your education?
6.
Miss Li:I complete my O-levels（剑桥O水准,新加坡的中考） three years ago and last
year I have taken three A levels（剑桥A水准,新加坡的高考）in Economics,Commerce and
History.
7.Interviewer:And what did you do since then?
8.
Miss Li:For the past I worked as a stenographer in a small firm.The
pay is all right but the work is not challenging enough and I feel I am
not learning very much.
9.Interviewer:What are your present duties and responisbilities?
10.
Miss Li:I do a few shorthand,typing and filing.But I have less
responsibilities than my colleagues.I would be much more better in my
works if I had more duties.
11.Interviewer:So you find the work a little dull?Have you spoken to your supervisor about this?
12.MIss Li:Yes,we discussed about the matter at our last meeting but he said he could not let me to do more wokr unless I can carry it on efficiently.If you think I can take what it has to get this job,I am prepared to do a more challenging work.