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这句英语可以吗?有没有语法错误及是否通顺
Currently,the problem of excessive packaging has become a hot button across society,the prevalence of which has greatly impacted­­ the environment.
写作文,自己造了这句话,我不知道对不对,语法上有没有什么错误,跪求高手指点
人气:409 ℃ 时间:2020-02-06 06:05:46
解答
完善後的句子应该是:
1 Currently,a hot button is the problem of excessive packaging across society,the prevalence of which has greatly impacted­­ the environment.
(必须用倒装句结构,因为of which距离excessive packaging 实在太远了.用is替换has become更能说明the problem的状态.)
2 Currently,the problem of excessive packaging has become a hot button across society,and its prevalence has a great side effect on the environment.
(用its替换the- - - of which会使句子更简单明确.has a great side effect on是英语natives在表达这种语境时常用的短语.用词的'to the point“是别人认为你英语ok的关键.)of which距离excessive packaging 实在太远了这个理由说的有点牵强Currently,the problem of excessive packaging has become a hot button across society,the prevalence of which has greatly impacted­­ the environment.如果是原句的话,of which就算指hot button ,我觉得也是通顺的。。你觉得呢a hot button 一般认为是“抽象的概念”,而这种概念本身是不会破坏the environment的。 朋友,不要有什麼想法,这里只是尽力而为。Just act on your preference.有道理!thanks
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