基础很差,帮忙修改一篇英语作文,方便我能学习一些语法知识.谢谢
请根据下面提示写一篇短文简要介绍网络红人朱之文. 1. 一位勤劳、才华横溢的农民歌唱家轰动了全世界. 2. 由于出身贫寒他几乎没有受到正规的学校教育但是却对音乐十分痴迷.不论风雨严寒他总是在当地的小树林里、河堤上、田野中纵情歌唱. 3. 他心地善良扶危济困.对周围的动物情有独钟院子里的鸡、鹅成了他的忠实听众. 4. 他的毅力和决心终于有了回报继英国版的苏珊大妈之后他获得了中国“苏珊大叔”的称号.
There is a hard work peasant who iscalled Uncle Susan of China.Just like Aunt Susan ,his voick was so attractive that shocked the world.
Because of born to poor,he almost never recieved the education in ferular school.But he is so crazy in music.No matter windy,rainy or cold days.He always sings in local wood.
He always help the poor man with a kind heart.he has eyes only for the animals.The chicken and goose in the yard that to be the loyal audience of him.
.In return to his determination and perseverance,he is more and more popular now.
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There is a hard work (hard work---hard-working)peasant who iscalled Uncle Susan of China.Just like Aunt Susan ,his voick was so attractive that (加上it) shocked the world.Because of born to (of bo...his voick was so attractive that (加上it) shocked the world. 请问这里为什么要加itNo matter (加上what)windy,rainy or cold days.He always sings in local wood. 请问这里为什么加whatThe chicken and goose in the yard that to be the loyal audience of him.这个句子错在哪 请问这篇文章如果字迹不怎么好看，30分能拿到多少分大概？that引导的是状语从句,一定要有主语的.所以加上it .no matter后加上疑问词才能引导从句.因从句中的中心词是名词days所以用what 修饰.The chicken and goose in the yard that to be the loyal audience of him这句结构不符合语法结构.that说不清它是引导词还是一代词,如果是引导词后应该有从句.你的没有,如果是代词句子也不需要这个意思.我猜想你是想说.他的眼中只有动物.所以这样改了一下.谢谢您，请问类似于：that引导的是状语从句,一定要有主语的.所以加上it . 这样的加主语的情况还有哪些？能不能详细说明下。任何从句都是句子都要有主语.谓语.对不起 亲，我还是很迷糊his voick was so attractive that (加上it) shocked the world. 这句里面的that不能充当主语吗？你看He is the young writer thathas authored the book. 这个句子就是对的啊状语从句中的引导词不做成份,如He is so tired that he can't walk on. 这里能把he去掉用that 来代替吗?一看这个你就会明白.
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