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My Dream
Everyone has a lot of dreams.Some people want to be rich,dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight.Others want to be famous,dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame.I have a lot of dreams,too.When I was a young girl,I dreamed of becoming a scientist in future.However,after years,my dream is more realistic that I want to teach foreigners Chinese.It will be so great that I can convey the mother language I am speak and the culture I grow up in.So I studied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.
During my study in the college,I make great efforts to learn English and Chinese culture.Although it is very difficult,I never give up my goal.I read a lot of books to get more knowledge.I cherish every chance to talk with foreigners in order to practice my oral language.Now I have made great progress.As long as I focus on your dream and try really hard,I believe it will come true.
我才上初一,很不实际,请帮我原文修改,再长一点,如果有有问题的句子也修改一下!我会给50~100分的!