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yesterday
Yesterday,I had a big surprise.there is a big park in Renmin Road,and we went there yesterday.There were lots and lots of people there.There were many beautiful flowers and trees there.The people was sang,danced and played chess there.We had a picnic in the park,the food was Chinese food,they were very delicious.Then we saw Chinese dancing in there.I really liked it.I want learn this dancing.
It's a very prefect day!
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解答
第一句话有些问题,用surprise有些不妥,和后文没有什么关系.你可以写成“I was very happy yesterday”或者“yesterday was a fine day”.“There were lots and lots of people there”这句话有问题应改为There were...
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