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Dear parents,thank you for your self-giving love
As the time went,I grow up gently and leavr my hometown for making a living,so the opporunity to contact with both of them is less and less.But I always believe thay my parents will love me forever.
When I was young,my home is expecially poor.So my father have to stay on a stange land for earning bread to ours family.And my mather raise our theer brothers to maturity self.
When I was in the hige school,my parents workded more hard and endeavor in order to get more money afford me to study.although they usually have to get up early to work and late off work.,they never have any complain.only hope that I can have a good achievemnt.
Then I went to the senior hige school in where I have to depart from my hometwon to study,it is mean my parents must to pay more monney for my school work.
Three years late,I went to the college in the city of foshan,it is all know that the tuition is so dear that a great number of people cann’t pay for it in china.But I never forgot the words,hard to learn tuition is not a problem,my parents tell me when I wound be off my family to the college.
At present,I have graduted from the medical college,and to be a doctor.Involuntarily,I am longing for giving them the money each month,however,my gage is too low to send any few of money back home.Essentially,I ought to go back home for the compotation in the spring festival,at last,that days I will be on duty.my dear parents I hope both of yours willl be health everyday.Your son.
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Dear parents,thank you for your self-giving love.(既然不是写给你父母的信这句话就没有必要了,或者改为I want to thank my parents for their self-giving love.) As the (the 去掉)time went,I grow(grew,过去...
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