帮忙修改英语作文啦!谢谢
Dear Sonia,
How’s it going? I hope you are in goodhealth. Things are fine here. Thanks for sending me the stationery. I can usethem to finish my homework. I will think of you as I use them. And I will study hard and won’t let you down.
By the way, my hometown is very beautiful. Our hometown has nice environment, fresh air and lovelyanimals. So welcome to my hometown. If you go to my hometown, you will have funthere.
Yours,
Han Jie
人气：472 ℃ 时间：2019-12-24 05:59:02
解答
通篇没有什么语法错误,不错.clause
不过I will think of you as I use them.有点小问题,虽然think of 有“想起”之意,但这里一般不这么表述,建议可以用remind of 、rememeber这些词组,as最好改为when比较合适.
其它的没什么问题,要是多用些复杂句式,高级词汇,歇后语就会更胜一筹.
祝佳作更上一层楼!
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