谁给看一下这个英语句子哪里有错误,如何改正,
Twilight gradually merged into darkness.And those what I think about in my heart changed into the dim light in the distance as well.I cann't make out what they are.What I can do is merely to see the scenery which I cherish fade away.
The wind is rising,it is so gentle that remind me of those bright smile which I would never,ever forget.