首先这是标准的瓷器国官话套话,逐句准确翻译后得到的只会是不地道的英文.
要想英文地道点的话,中文其实不必这么写.
近几年,云浮市经济、社会快速协调发展,原因是坚持了加快发展的目标,将深化改革作为动力,把扩大开放为突破口,借助于珠三角经济区的延伸发展,积极吸纳经济发达国家和地区产业转移,大力发展民营经济.
During the past several years,Yunfu‘s economy and society has been developing on the fast track in a ballanced and harmonized way by sticking to an accelerated developing target,powered by deepening reforming and more opening to the outside world,taking the road for development as an extension of the Pearl River Delta Economic Zone,actively receiving the industrial transfer from the developed countries and regions,and greatly promoting the private economy.
这样应该好点.