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The shopping experience
The things happened many years ago.At that moment I was a little child.I remember that was a National day.
That is a fine day,The sunshine through the clouds.In that beautiful day,My mum decided to go shopping with me.
In the market had many clothes,But I didn’t know How did pick those clothes.Because I was very little and shy.But the last,I found a red T-shirt,I loved it because I loved red then I bought it.
Because it was a new clothes,So the T-shirt was washed then put on the rope in outside.I was so happied I bought a new clothes,I wanted to wear it when the term began.
The next day.I had a good mood then I jumped and jumped to take the clothes but there no clothes,no anything.I hate thief!
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