找一个英语高手帮忙修改下作文!关于fast food
In the 21th centry,with the development of society,the pace of people’s life become very rapid.More and more Chinese people refer to eat fast food to save time.So all kinds of fast food springs up in China now.
As China open door to the outside world,a lot of western fast food is known to people.There is no doubt that a large number of western fast food is delicious,like chips,hot dogs,hamburger and so on,moreover,they are convenient.KFC is the most popular one,many people regrad going to the KFC as a fashion.
However,is it western fast food that good?In fact they are almost junk food which contain so much calorie that can make you fat and unhealthy.
Chinese fast food seems to be much healthier than western’s.For example,noodle contains less calorie but more vitamin and other element we need.It can improve our digestive system.Most of conventional fast food is made from rice,cereal,vegetable and meat.
Eatting conventional fast food can save time and keep pace with this modern society.However,for the sake of our health we should not eat too much fast food..
人气:144 ℃ 时间:2020-03-23 11:04:31
解答
In the 21st century,with the development of the society,the pace of people’s life becomes very rapid.More and more Chinese people refer to eat fast food to save time.So many kinds of fast food spring up in China.
As China opened its door to the outside world,a lot of western fast food is known by Chinese people.There is no doubt that many of them are really delicious,like chips,hot dog,hamburger,and so on.Moreover,they are very convenient.KFC is the most popular one,and many people regard going to the KFC as a fashion.
However,is western fast food that good?In fact it is almost junk food which contains so many calories that can make you fat and unhealthy.
Chinese fast food seems to be much healthier than western’s.For example,noodle contains fewer calories but more vitamins and other element we need.It can improve our digestive system.Most of the conventional fast food is made from rice,cereal,vegetable and meat.
Eating fast food can save time and keep pace with this modern society.However,for the sake of our health,we should not eat too much.
大致改了一下,你再自己修改修改
推荐
猜你喜欢
- 根据下列数的规律 -1 -3 1 -1 3 1,__最后一个数是
- m平方-n平方-6m-4n+5因式分解
- 阅读理解 Congratulations,Mr Jones,it is a girl.
- 470-X=2(190+X)怎么解
- 将一个高3分米的圆柱体的底面分成若干相等的扇形,然后沿半径将这个圆柱体切开并重新拼成一个近似长方体.
- 三个数的平均数是8.6,其中第一数是9.1,第二个数比第三个数小0.1,第三个数是多少?
- 某校女生占全校学生数的52%,比男生多80人,这个学校有多少人
- 舅舅比张强大19岁,正好是张强年龄的3倍多1岁.舅舅和张强各是几岁