两句都不对.应该是：Because it can help the poor who need money.第一句应该对呀需要钱是定语.这个who一定不能省略，省略就会造成句子有两个主要谓语动词，就错了。就像两个小句杂糅到了一起一样。例如：it can help the poor +the poor need money.这样是不对的。Because it can help the poor need money. 拆下:Because it can help the poor.然后加个定语(need money)修饰 the poor 变Because it can help the poor need money.怎么不行