语法错误先不考虑的话,文章中关于希望禁烟的理由,没有能够非常有条理的说清楚,部分原因不合逻辑.不好意思比较直接点出来,因为三分之二的句子都需要进行部分改动,你是不是想表达下面的意思：
1、抽烟浪费钱,有害健康,举例：哮喘病人、降低患心血管类疾病概率
2、抽烟的人有口臭,影响交际.举例：不喜欢靠近抽烟的人,身上有怪味.
结论：希望禁烟那你重新修改下= =我改就等于帮你重新写了……

《Smoking should be banned in all public areas》


I strongly agreed that smoking should be banned in public areas. Here are my reasons.

First of all, smoking is a waste of money, and harm to our health. people with asthma will have a bigger chance to get worse if they are frequently exposed to second hand smoke.

Also, smoking people aremore likely to suffer from heart-related illnesses, which is verified by many scientific evidence now.

Secondly, long term smokers often have stink breath. No one likes stink people. For example, most of the friends I know do not like to be friends with people who always has a cigarette on the mouth. Everytime I walk by smoking people, I could always smell his bad breath, which is really annoying.

So I wish smoking could be banned in the public and we can live in a free-second-hand-smoke world.

我写得好累，再也不答作文题了……还不见得写得好……嗯。就你了，O(∩_∩)O谢谢