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Women hold up half the sky
Do women hold up half the sky?Decades ago ,many people will give you a negative answer ,including me.But today ,I think most of us will say “yes”.
There has been such a big change for the last century .When all of the change has not happen,in most people’s mind,including women themselves,believe that it is the duty of women to stay home.Women’s work is to do the housework ,look after babies and prepare tasteful food for their husband who work outside for the whole family.In that days ,few women work outside.They do just what is said in the paragraph.
Nowadays ,few people consider that there is really a big difference between man and woman which is not changeable .The society is developing rapidly,more and more housework can be done by machines and plenty of suitable work for women came out .Women can find a satisfied job in almost every field.There’s no surprise it that you find your officer is a femal when you graduate from school.It is appearently that women really hold up half the sky today.Women can earn money outside as men do,but that would be a hard work for men to do the housework or care for babies.There’s no doubt for that.