你翻译的非常好.
其它的说法包括：
I wish you are right in front of me when I open my eyes.
I hope to see you in front of me when I open my eyes.
如果要强调”都“的话,可以这样说：
I wish to see you always when I open my eyes.
I wish to see you every time that I open my eyes.
楼上说的I wish to see you whenever I open my eyes 也可以,不过听起来有些”强迫“人的感觉,更有这个意思：我随时睁开眼都希望你在我面前.