this weekend ,my father takes me to the zoo .i am very happy.because i love animals.after lunch,my father and I pack a little things.then we take a bus too the zoo.we arrive there about 10 minutes.then we walk around the zoo.i think animals are amazing.there are many beautiful birds,big elephants,the lines the tegars.and i love the monkeys at the most.when we get the monkey mountains,the monkeys are playing.they are so happy.i want to give their some food.but there is a sign say:"do not feed the animals"we play there and we forget the time.when we get home,it is aready seven.oh!it is such a great day.
楼主你也不说多少字,这么多行吗?没有过去式和将来式.都是你要求的.