从语法上说这个句子是通的,除了时态.这里用一般过去时态会好一些.
有这样的用法：hurry to do sth.如：They were hurrying to catch their train.
如果想更简洁,可以说：I ran to her house hurriedly.
但是更简洁的表达是：I rushed to her house.既然用了rush,就已经包含“匆匆忙忙”的意思了,也更传神.