帮我看看我的英语作文有没有语法错误Everyone has their favorite stars.My favorite st_英语解答

帮我看看我的英语作文有没有语法错误
Everyone has their favorite stars.My favorite star is Zhou Jielun,because he sings songs very well.
He is a good singer.I like he sings songs.he is famous for he is very working-hard.His life is very hard when he young .He uesd to be The people who work for others.Then there is a person to help him out of the first record.
Can you tell me your favorite star.

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解答

1,I like he sings songs.错误,I like listening to his songs.2,working-hard 改成hard-working 3,when he was young(少了一个was) 4,He used to be...others改成He used to help others.5最后一句是问号.纯手打,4的位置，我想改成普通人，请问普通人用英文怎么说ordinary people不加s