麻烦检查一下是否有语法错误
A happy party
One day,all the animals wanted to have a party in the forest.They should prepare some fruits for the party,but they had to pick up some fruits by themselves.The little pig didn’t want to work for others,so he said,“I am tired,I will go home.” But he hid himself to pick some fruits to eat.
The other animals didn’t bother him.The giraffe is tall.He can pick up coconuts and peaches.The little monkey can climb the tree.He said,“I can pick up the bananas,and they’re very nice.” He also helped the giraffe to pick up the peaches.The squirrels carried some apples.The rabbits picked up some red strawberries.The bear said,“I am strong,so I can carry the big watermelons.”And the little birds flied and picked up some grapes.
They helped each other,and they had so many fruits.The little pig saw,he also wanted to eat,but he was too shy to go to the party.He realized his mistakes.At last,he said sorry to his friends.
The pig and his friends enjoyed themselves at the party.They are very happy.
人气:133 ℃ 时间:2020-06-17 16:45:48
解答
最后一句,they are very happy 中的are 应该改为 were .因为短文是在讲述过去发生的一件事,而且文中也一直用的都是过去时.
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