这个你要自己先做一下,让我替你检查检查好不?要不然,你父母会骂我们的.检查检查好不Summer vocation was coming! Jenny's parents had promised Jenny that they would take her to Beijing for the vocation. So, now, they were on the train to Beijing from Guangzhou. Jenny looked out of the window, enjoying big trees, buildings, green hills and rivers. About half an hour later,they began to read newpapers and books for fun, and once ina while, they played cards with other passengers. At noon, they had milk, bread and sandwiches for lunch. At 6 pm , they arrived at Beijing Station .很不错！我基本上没改什么！只是要注意下时态的一致，和关联词的使用。学会连句成篇。有时候，状语在前或是在后对整个语流影响都是挺大的。你注意对照一下，那点点问题究竟出在哪。：）