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New Year`s Resolution
2007 is over,and 2008 is coming.Of course,I`m going to make some New Year`s Resotutions.In the new year,I`m going to study harder and harder.First I`m going to try to study science better.Because I think my science achievement is very terrible.I have work harder.And I`m going to do exercise more to keep fit and to be taller.Now I`m start playing tennis.I want to play it well.Finally I hope our life becomes more and more happy..I will learn writing with my left hand during the next year
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解答
倒数第二句和倒数第一句换一下位置,倒数第二句是总结的句子.Finally就不要动了,改为“ Finally I will learn writing with my left hand during the next year.I hope our lives becomes more and more happily.”.-...
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