> 英语 >
帮我改下文章,看看有没有语法问题或加上什么
Winter was gone,spring comes.My favorite season is spring.Spring is the frist season in a year .There are three months in spring :March,April and May.I love spring best,because it's very beautiful.In spring,the weather is aways sunny and rainy,it's not cold and not hot,it's warmer and warmer.The flowers begin to open and the trees begin to turn green.The birds are singing in the sky,they are happy.The animals will go out to play.Many people like to go out and enjoy the sunshine.I like to fly kites and to go hiking with my parents.Spring is colorful and beautiful.So I like spring very much.
I like the spring,therefore I hoped that the people protect the nature.
人气:118 ℃ 时间:2020-06-06 03:07:05
解答
Winter was gone and spring is coming.My favorite season is spring.Spring is the frist season in a year.There are three months in spring: March, April and May. I love spring best, because it's very beautiful.In spring,the weather may be suddenly change. Once it is sunny,but after a while, it may rain. Spring is neither cold norhot and it's getting warmer and warmer.The flowers begin to open and the trees begin to turn green.The birds sing happily in the sky.The animals go out to play.Many people like to go out and enjoy the sunshine. I like to fly kites and to go hiking with my parents. Spring is colorful and beautiful, so I like it very much.
I like spring, therefore I hope that the people can protect the nature and give us a wonderful scene.
我在你的文章上做了小小的修改啦,希望看上去不错吧!哈哈!好是好可有些句子和词不在我的范围内,我才初一额,其实你写得不错啊,修改一点点就好了。哦,谢谢
推荐
猜你喜欢
© 2024 79432.Com All Rights Reserved.
电脑版|手机版