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My name is XXX, and I am from Xingping, Shaanxi. I have been into college for two months, during when I feel got used to campus life gradually. It is really a pleasure to know all of you guys. Each one of you is so sweet, especially my roommates. My biggest hobby is rock n' roll music, in whick I like AC/DC and Guns N' Roses. The reason I like them is simple, that I love rock music from the bottom of my heart. I wish you guys can also find the charm of rock music. I will be together with you guys for a long time, and I wish we could have very good time for the entire four yearsm, and become good companions during the days in future. Thank you!