英语作文,帮我看看这是作文中的一段话,帮我稍微改改,有什么语法问题请指出,作文是关于邀请信的,
we hold this party.For one thing,that day is the birthday of our tutor and we will invite him also at that time ;for another thing,we would like to get together ,before the graduation and leaving of each.
还有这段话开始的we hold this party怎么融入到整个句子
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解答
如果主要是说明举办聚会的原因,就这么改好了
One reason why we are holding the party is to celebrate the birthday of our tutor,who will also be invited to it; another is that we'd like to get together before graduation when we part from each other.
还有别的信息要写进去吗
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