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Yesterday I got up from bed with a strong sleepy feeling.However,I told myself in heart that i should 克服 this feeling.When i reached to the lab,my learning brother still didn't be there.So i had no choise but waiting for him.I was so boring that i started the desktop computer and surfed the internet to acquire some news.One of the most important news was about japan earthquake.A lot of 网友 talked over the stuff.One part of them showed their sympdthy to the japan victims in the desease.Others just held the point that the japanese deserved to this desease becasuse of the crime they had done to chinese people.We went to an institue after my learning brother came to the lab.For all the morning,we talked over the project with a engineer.
人气:364 ℃ 时间:2019-08-31 19:00:22
解答
第一句,你已经使用got up (已经包含从床上起来的意思),就不必再用from bed.
第二句,克服-----overcome
第三句,与其用didn't be there 不如用 didn't come.使句子简练明了.
第四五句非常好.
第六句,Japan注意大小写.
第九句,desease是疾病的意思,灾难是disaster
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