哎,大作文貌似偏题了,some people think goverment should dam dangerous sports,others think
people have freedom to choose what they like to do..我完全没讨论政府,只说了危险运动对人们的利弊..是不是跑题了..而且时间非常赶..后半段几乎是赶出来的..论据也不足..本来觉得前半段写的不错的...能上5.5么.